Sunday, June 21, 2009

Stage 2 of the bird composite

I saw that the top left bird was too large, and not reading well, so I shrank it down, the head in particular was all wrong, I am happier now. I started to introduce leaves and the tail of the right hand bird to get the bottom right area of my paper balanced. I still saw a confusion with the wing of the middle bird behind the frontal bird's head, so I begin take that wing off, poor Baby, she will be an amputee.

3 comments:

Dean H. said...

Coming along great, Rae! I particularly like the placement, grouping, of the four heads in this work!

Jo Castillo said...

The painting is great, the comments made me smile and chuckle.

Rae Andrews, Contemporary Texas Artist in all media said...

Tee hee well we artists are so good at chopping off limbs and feet if need be, Baby will forgive me,I hope.