Well here is another 'reworked' demonstration. You had better get used to my reworked demos, I have A LOT! Please forgive my indulgence.
There were parts of this especially the middle wave (see below image) and crest which I did like and wanted to keep.
It used to look like this cropped version below. I had only cropped the image in Photoshop and pondered that version for a while. In hindsight I perhaps should have gone with this interpretation.
However, I hated to waste this gorgeous sheet of Sennelier paper.
So...I decided to stay with the whole image and try and make it work.